Persuasive Writing

Over the past few weeks, students in room 10 have been learning about persuasive writing. We have looked at many different techniques used by people trying to persuade in both written form and in advertising. The students have really embraced this topic and have produced some really good arguments. Below are some examples from the debate about fast food or the ever topical Donald Trump. ENJOY!!

Take away food

Only a fool would think that fast food is healthy. Mcdonald's has lots of fat in it and gloton it is not healthy.KFC’s batter on there chicken has fat and it is not healthy . but it is delicious . If you do not like take away food you are a sad person . if you have not tried takeaway food you have not lived a life . a lot of people like to eat take away food but it has lots & lots of fat in it i’m trying to tell you it’s not healthy. It is a sort of food you do not eat every day.

By CHARLISE

                                                           Donald Trump                                                                     

Most people would agree that Donald Trump is a bad prescient because he’s ethusiast he’s also building a wall between Mexico and Amecia.He disrespect’s woman aswell as children.Only a fool would think that Donald Trump is a great prescient.When people were voting he said some disrespectful things.He lies to Amecians and say lets make Amecia great again but all he’s doing is making Amecia bad!            

By Tahlia

Most people would agree that Donald Trump is a good president, but we don’t. Are we expected to believe that Donald Trump is good. Here are some reasons why Donald trump is bad news.                                                                 Firstly, he hates children. In one of his meetings a baby cried but he said “Oh it’s ok I love children”. But when the baby left he was like “I hate children”. He has kids, he probably hates them.                                                                       Secondly, Donald Trump is really obnoxious to women. I heard that he called a pregnant women pudgy. Donald trump is flirting with celebrities. He even flirted with Hillary Clinton. We can see from the evidence that Donald Trump is a bad president.

By Trinity and Lydia : )